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IF I
By Biggus on 09/26/2007
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the answer to poetry... 


Written by Vintaris  (9/26/2007 12:04:49 PM)

...and all it's questions.

Go through this poem, and really think of all the answers to the questions you form. Write them down, add imagery...add your fears and creativity into adjectives.

I could think of wonderful things to write about if I went and answered those questions in poetic format. I say do it before I do ;0)

question lines make a great rough draft to an intense finished piece.

cheers
Bri

If I 

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Written by edwardhartman  (9/29/2007 7:06:17 PM)

Your point of view works well. I like your poem.
Stanza 3 "was" should be "were." Also, if you are going to punctuate, all should be punctluated.


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