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he is no god
By blogetry on 10/22/2007
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Bravo! 


Written by Kizz4k  (10/22/2007 10:16:15 AM)

James, this was wonderfully written!

When I stumble across a poem like this, it paints my mind with its colorful words and makes me smile.
I too, shall wrinkle with time, and surgery shall not find its nest in the flesh of my aging limbs.

My favorite line, "Oozing like pimples on a popping parade."
Wonderfully descriptive!
Demands to be read out loud!
Write on, brother!

~Kizz4k


good message..:) 


Written by Soulfade the Ghost  (10/22/2007 11:03:32 AM)

STG

thanx 

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Written by blogetry  (10/22/2007 2:59:50 PM)

Thanks all for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed this piece!

 


Written by Vintaris  (10/23/2007 1:38:14 PM)

tuck crows feet under El Dorado's springs,-

good line! :0)
creative piece for the plastic dopehead society.

cheers
bri

eternal youth 

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Written by blogetry  (10/23/2007 2:27:30 PM)

glad u like it vint...thanx for the rd/rview

 


Written by TheDividedAngel  (4/15/2009 6:30:44 PM)



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