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By LIA on 11/07/2007
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Written by sheerluck  (11/7/2007 6:14:42 PM)

a little long for my taste."And your lips are as addictive and magical as any love potion
Unrelenting and yet beautiful never letting me sway" is my favorite line, it flows nicely.

 


Written by f4egirl  (11/7/2007 6:41:16 PM)

i love this poem..i can totally relate...nothing compares to true love

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Written by LIA  (11/9/2007 6:05:28 PM)

This is dedicated my dearest Steven the one that is so close yet so far away

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Written by Evangel  (11/10/2007 1:29:41 AM)

It's a good poem overall. I like the content itself, but I think the addition of punctuation, mainly commas, in certain places would make the poem flow better. This in turn puts extra emphasis on the important parts as readers have to slow down or pause at certain points.


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