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By Aileen on 11/13/2007
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Written by candygrl16  (11/13/2007 5:34:47 PM)

try to be more creative with the beginning of each line it would really help this poem pop


Written by Unmanifested_One  (11/15/2007 4:37:26 AM)

I agree with the last comment. Don't get me wrong the poem is still awesome, but it can definitely be better. Try playing with it a little.

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