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Her Silence Is My Madness
By Unmanifested_One on 11/15/2007
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Written by sheerluck  (11/15/2007 3:54:58 PM)

i love what you write, i really do. you usually write poems with quatrains and a-b rhyme, maybe you could branch out about. i am positive that you would be successful, you already have so much talent.


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Written by Vintaris  (11/15/2007 6:16:16 PM)

I like the last line, perfect

the rhyming was not obvious, gold star for that alone

looking forward to your next artful



Written by rodochs  (11/21/2007 2:38:21 AM)

I love quoting my favorite parts

"Falling to the ground, as night replaces day,
It seems there is nothing left of me."


You've succeeded ... 

Written by Sabre  (11/21/2007 5:15:36 AM)

in your endeavor to make one's heart bleed


Written by Biggus  (11/21/2007 6:38:01 AM)


Written by rachelle1165  (12/8/2007 10:39:36 PM)

You've succeeded in your endeavor,
To make my heart bleed.
Out of my mind I will sever,
These thoughts of you I still need.

love that 2nd line too...great poem


Written by jgall  (12/9/2007 4:35:50 PM)

Well done


Written by AnaIsabel  (1/1/2008 9:46:46 AM)

Very good!!!


Written by black_iris  (3/6/2008 10:48:31 AM)

Raw and out there. I love it!

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