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promise unfulfilled
By blogetry on 11/21/2007
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Written by Unmanifested_One  (11/21/2007 9:09:21 PM)

My favorite lines:

Crimson streams gushed from his mangled thighs
Like busted pipelines
Broken beyond repair,

I love the way this poem enriches the imagery with every line. Your poetry is promising, keep it up.

thankx 

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Written by blogetry  (11/22/2007 8:56:09 AM)

Thanx for the rd/rview/encouragement unmanifested one...

*snaps fingers* 


Written by lovehandlesgalore  (11/22/2007 5:49:33 PM)

This really tugged my heartstrings.

mine too 

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Written by blogetry  (11/23/2007 10:08:50 AM)

This issue (documented on CNN)tugged mine so much I had to write about it....Thanx for the comment

great work 


Written by f4egirl  (11/26/2007 3:30:52 PM)

this is a very inspirational peice i enjoyed it a lot

 


Written by Biggus  (11/28/2007 6:49:26 AM)



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