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Into the Dark
By dreams_die_young on 12/05/2007
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sweet and sad 


Written by rachelle1165  (12/5/2007 9:20:17 PM)

and i like the rhythmic lines very much

 


Written by redcoma  (7/10/2008 8:34:38 AM)

An amazing poem. It flows really nicely and the rhyming patterns are brilliant. I really like:

"We will make it through, we must start,
Do not be afraid, for we will never part'


i hate to use the old cliche of "i can relate to that" but i kind of can. Preparing yourself for dark times.

Keep writing and sharing.

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Written by Waystokillabutterfly3  (7/10/2008 10:13:08 AM)

If you want to make this seem dark, (if thats what you were trying to do) try to rhyme less... I know it sounds weird, but if every line has a word that rhymes, it sounds like a little kid wrote it...

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Written by Waystokillabutterfly3  (7/10/2008 10:13:08 AM)

If you want to make this seem dark, (if thats what you were trying to do) try to rhyme less... I know it sounds weird, but if every line has a word that rhymes, it sounds like a little kid wrote it...

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Written by Waystokillabutterfly3  (7/10/2008 10:13:09 AM)

If you want to make this seem dark, (if thats what you were trying to do) try to rhyme less... I know it sounds weird, but if every line has a word that rhymes, it sounds like a little kid wrote it...


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