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Regret Is A Tight Rope
By Unmanifested_One on 12/06/2007
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Written by rachelle1165  (12/6/2007 7:07:24 AM)

the absence of closure...you have rendered it perfect in this poem...again, i can SO relate...

In all honesty, fault is knighted mine,
I could not let go of who I held dear.
So I dwell behind time, changed to this loss,
Separation from love is the worst fear.

i love this stanza because it RELATES TO THE BASIC FEAR OF LOSING LOVE..AND HOW SOME OF US, THE TORMENTED AND ARTISTIC WANDERERS, FALL INTO OBSESSION..AND CAN'T LET GO WITHOUT HAVING OUR FINGERS PRIED OFF...AND NOT EVEN THEN....and also how we find it hard to see and accept our own failure and faults that brought us to this loss...

Thank you 

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Written by Unmanifested_One  (12/6/2007 11:05:52 PM)

Your words are kind and they bring me much happiness. It's good to know someone who can relate so well to me. It's true, losing a first love is in a way is the writers great obsession. 'Cause for me, it became my primary inspiration.


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Written by sheerluck  (12/7/2007 3:52:43 PM)

this poem fills me with alot of emotion. right now, im struggiling with letting go of my first love. he's perfect in every way yet our relationship was so flawed. I want him back but i know that the "rope" that is our pat is not easily severed. I may be misinterpreting your poem, and this is because right now, i am completely blinded by my feelings and emotions

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Written by Sabre  (12/9/2007 7:11:29 AM)

swirling whirlpool of emotion. Obviously not a poem that just popped up finished in your head. Some effort here or does it come that easy? " With fragility I hold a strong link." - a reverse split oxymoron!

To Sabre 

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Written by Unmanifested_One  (12/9/2007 1:33:06 PM)

No, you're right my friend, this poem did take a lot of work. I'm glad that it's over and done with, 'cause it was a piece that I struggled greatly with.


Written by Biggus  (12/10/2007 8:06:46 AM)

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