my best friend's girlfriend....
Written by rachelle1165 (12/9/2007 10:51:32 AM)
||ah, yes...a common occurence...unrequited? anyway..very moving....and intense...yearning..
'And her joy I would gladly uncover,
Yet my hands on her heart do not have grip'.
'And her joy I would gladly uncover;
my hands on her heart cannot keep their grip.;
'my hands on her heart continue to slip'
anyway...another good poem
Written by Unmanifested_One (12/9/2007 1:29:38 PM)
||I appreciate your kind words of criticism. I'll change that line to one of your suggested ones. I didn't like the way it sounded anyway.
Written by starry-eyed (12/9/2007 2:20:26 PM)
Written by Biggus (12/10/2007 8:06:12 AM)
Written by sheerluck (12/11/2007 5:28:30 PM)
||this is such a pretty poem. the girl that inspired this poem is so lucky to have you in her life.
Written by TTS (12/12/2007 11:58:40 PM)