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It's True
By Skeleton_Rose on 12/17/2007
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Written by Davidjroth2002  (12/17/2007 3:53:45 PM)

Nicely done. The only thing I'd suggest is maybe breaking the lines in the third stanza after the commas, making it 4 lines instead of two. I think that wqould flow better.

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