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"Declaring Movement"
By Unmanifested_One on 12/30/2007
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Written by MentalVoyage  (12/30/2007 1:31:19 PM)

I love this poem! Not sure as to what draws me in but it is wonderful. I love the inagery it gives me llike a mini movie in my head, Wonderful!!!!!!

 


Written by rachelle1165  (12/30/2007 4:52:23 PM)

She knows I am the anxious friend,
I tell her with my expressions.
Those tender soft hands just maybe can mend,
My heart shattered from love's past oppressions.

i can relate to this stanza the most...the hope that a new love can wash away past hurt of another love....when only in reality, it is ourselves,alone,without a new love, that we can truly put the past away...if we hold onto the pain of past hurt, we are only more vulnerable to a new relationship...and if that new love ends up bad, then the pain is doubled and more desperate...ok, enough of psychoanalysis...i feel and understand your poem well...you rhymes are good...im not sure if it flows as well as many of your previous poems, but i do like your choice of words and images...

open that door baby :-) 


Written by blogetry  (1/3/2008 10:11:15 AM)

It took two reads...and WOW! This is magical stuff dude!

My fav verse:
"This desire is a muted melody,
It plays such sweet sounds whenever she's near.
Who else hears but her... Nobody,
'Tis a song for our ears to hear...."

I totally felt the hesitant passion of once-jilted lover....but, hopefully, if honey#2 really hears (and loves) your "muted melody", she will "open the door".

Well done!


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