Written by rachelle1165 (1/4/2008 6:11:35 PM)
Written by HAZARD (1/4/2008 8:47:34 PM)
||Really enjoyed this - just simple easy to visualise images - not trying too hard to be great - just eloquent and right!
Written by HAZARD (1/6/2008 4:55:55 PM)
||Passion kindled by a white cotton skirt and the undulating shape and weight of a woman.
Great poem -
The presence of a real person is captured here -
I could see her and feel the different materials rubbing together - nylon and cotton, hair on silk - polished nails clipping buttons and zips...
Well that's my version of her...