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Teacake Romance
By HAZARD on 01/08/2008
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Written by Zyskandar A. Jaimot  (1/10/2008 9:17:11 AM)

ti h - the real question is WHY DOES THIS 'NOT WORK' IN THE WAY YOU WISH IT TOO??? dunno technica;;y it is fome with the right metaphors/allusions AND perhaps it is just 'too inside' meaning you are too close to the more subtle nuances of this? ANYWAY thanks for sharing regards zaj[this definitely left this reader on the outside of the vignette]

 

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Written by HAZARD  (1/10/2008 9:33:43 AM)

interesting comments - its a very english place with very english things, with very english wants and all that tea cakes bring.... plus a little homage to betjeman.

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Written by blogetry  (1/11/2008 3:44:28 PM)


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Written by blogetry  (1/11/2008 3:47:22 PM)

the way you set the scene/ ambience before the one-sided "romantic" encounter...

write on!
regards,
b


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