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By Aileen on 01/12/2008
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Written by Zyskandar A. Jaimot  (1/12/2008 3:06:40 PM)

to a - in both poems of yours today there are too many i, you, her pronounsd disturbing the readers concentration and any flow in the poems thanks for sharing regards zaj

 


Written by evilangel18  (1/20/2008 9:45:51 PM)

I really like this poem it's sad though. you have a poetic soul but you need to look at some of your sentences and try to make them flow better because you do not want to take away from the beauty of your poem by having people stumble on the wording and punctuation of your poem.

 


Written by Biggus  (1/21/2008 6:59:05 AM)



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