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It Was You...
By Aileen on 01/17/2008
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Written by jjmo  (1/17/2008 1:35:26 PM)


 


Written by evilangel18  (1/20/2008 9:40:07 PM)

I like it but especially towards the end of the poem your sentences were a little choppy if you rewrite some of the sentences to make it flow better this poem will be amazing.

 


Written by Biggus  (1/21/2008 6:59:47 AM)


hey you!, 


Written by thedeadfreak  (2/18/2008 12:38:38 AM)

remember that guy that i thought i would marry? yeah, he broke up with me because he thought i was cheating on him, and i really wasn't. He's acting like an ass about it now and it's making me feel terrible.I've cried myself to sleep for 1 month now and he doesn't even care or still love me though i will always love him, though he really could care less a bout that 8 months together. funny, that you're expieriencing this too or atleast somewhat from what i get from your work. it'll get better... i'm getting better now too. it's the worst when you're alone but youll always have your friends to help you feel better.
loves much, keep writing,

~Anni3


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