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By ShatteredGlass on 01/21/2008
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Written by LOVLEY101  (1/24/2008 11:44:08 AM)

I think in this poem it shows you a path out.



Written by daclosetpoet  (5/28/2008 8:23:17 PM)

wow great and raw....loved it and ya its hard sometimes to be all alone in your sorrows...


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Written by LeeLee  (5/29/2008 12:56:09 AM)

So what's it about?

so close to home 

Written by finaaal  (5/29/2008 10:33:07 PM)

it takes alot to write these words,
it also hurts to feel some of what your writing its sorta like what i feel alot of the time.
very strong to write such things it seems a very dark place to visit so dark i couldent even write like that, its not a bad thing its more good it shows no fear in a way, many people hide there meanings in what they write i find i think you have alot about you to say such things and not hide


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Written by lillyillusion  (5/29/2008 11:54:52 PM)

wow keep writing!

Extreme emotion 

Written by DebDay1955  (7/8/2008 12:09:29 AM)

Raw emotion always makes a good subject for poetry.

It's also some of the hardest to write because we tend to want to protect ourselves by hiding emotions out of the public eye.

* A couple of grammar/spelling/typo errors easily fixed:
if Ill live threw should; be if I live through

Not knowing if tomarrow / should read ..tomorrow

DO keep on sharing and writing, thanks for sharing!

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