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A symphony of splinters
By hank on 01/31/2008
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Written by Zyskandar A. Jaimot  (1/31/2008 1:58:49 PM)

to h - almost almost a great ending thanks for sharing now go wash your hands regards zaj

as usual 


Written by rachelle1165  (1/31/2008 7:54:06 PM)

your last lines are a shocker...u really have a pretty twisted muse,dont u? it's great!

 


Written by motherofson  (2/1/2008 2:53:44 PM)

I recommend using complete words instead of contractions unless it is inside quotes. It is not as confusing. Uniquely written, not cliche, I like that. Why did you lie, though? I do not get that.


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