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Shallow Grave
By ChelleKen on 02/20/2008
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Reviews: 7


Written by chuckykillerdoll  (2/20/2008 5:43:04 PM)

amazing poem,very beautiful.

unique structure 

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Written by rachelle1165  (2/21/2008 5:37:23 PM)

until then,
in this shallow grave
I wait
for the clouds to disappear,
and for love's gentle thaw
to revive me.

best stanza

You're Amazing! 

Written by Letty_2  (2/22/2008 12:22:06 AM)

Every poem I have ever read of yours has always left me wanting more. This one alone makes me envious of you and your amazing talent. Have you published a book yet? I would love to purchase one if you have. I love how your poems just pull me in to them. When reading your work, it's like I'm reading a novel because it feels like I escape reality for just a moment, but that's all I need. You have a magnificent talent. I know I have told you that before, but the more I read of yours just shows how truly amazing you really are. Keep writing friend, your biggest fan is more than eager to read.



Written by Unmanifested_One  (3/7/2008 5:17:15 PM)

I love your style of writing, your technique is unique indeed. This piece brought me on a journey filled with metaphoric imagery and delightful rhyme, can't wait to see some newer material from you.


Written by Highseas  (3/7/2008 9:41:52 PM)

Thats how i describe my spirit as I swallowed every word. Just perfect


Written by myfatheris_God  (3/24/2008 6:39:34 PM)

You nailed this. everything... the feel of the poem is perfect you captured every part you were supposed to. i love this.


Written by snakemoney7  (3/27/2008 1:23:45 AM)

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