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Fading Away
By Letty_2 on 02/21/2008
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Written by rachelle1165  (2/22/2008 7:59:30 AM)


Once again 


Written by ChelleKen  (2/24/2008 12:30:46 AM)

I like how you draw the reader in. I can feel the emotion in every line and every stanza. There is one grammatic thing - in the third stanza, first line, I think it should be "pleas" instead of "pleads", but that's really all I see. And don't worry Letty, with your wonderful poetry, I don't think you are having any trouble with anyone notcing you on here =D. Keep writing, and we'll keep noticing you!


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