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By Biggus on 02/25/2008
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Written by blogetry  (2/25/2008 10:22:02 AM)

the message of yearning and the rhymes....would suggest matching the syllable counts a litle better...eg.in v2 , l3 n 4 each needs about 2 or 3 more syllables to synchronize with the rhythm and flow of v1....but that's just me.


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Written by wickedhart  (2/26/2008 2:17:38 PM)

I really like.....:)

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