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What a Sight
By MikeC16958 on 02/27/2008
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a good idea 

Written by rachelle1165  (2/27/2008 9:31:56 PM)

and rhythm


for something that one thinks they saw

an open heart

a spring-time thaw


Written by blogetry  (2/28/2008 6:46:54 AM)

but could be a little better, methinks...e.g. "wrought" l3 seems slightly forced...suggest revising e.g. "What's unsaid of this world... when.." or som'thin lik dat :-)
otherwise...good...a thinker's poem...

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