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Your Little Chair
By Rachy88 on 02/29/2008
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Written by Unknown Member  (2/29/2008 3:47:08 PM)

u can tell the story
from th poem. ots of emotions there.

Whilst I... 

Written by chinagirl  (2/29/2008 8:53:52 PM)

like the idea of this one I am not so sure about the flow and the rhyming on this occasion seems a little forced and a bit too much word bending in this one. Again the idea is very appealing. Rock on!


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Written by Rachy88  (2/29/2008 10:35:56 PM)

yea. it really didn't flow very well. i redid it and i think it's a little better this time.

oh and thank you for the critique! i'll take anything to help me write better.


Written by Jwls88  (3/1/2008 1:14:02 AM)

Broke my heart I tell you - my HEART!


Written by Balloon_Animal  (3/1/2008 5:17:46 AM)


Written by bartleby_abu  (3/1/2008 3:42:24 PM)

A wonderful image which you use delightfully. I have no doubt that a real life situation forms some basis for these words, which makes them all the more heart-wrenching. Continue...

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