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Not Much as Ever
By poemgoddess101 on 03/15/2008
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Written by rachelle1165  (3/15/2008 12:05:22 PM)

i feel like there should be more to this poem....

what i meant by "more" 

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Written by rachelle1165  (3/19/2008 6:41:05 PM)

is that the last 2 line dont seem to tie in with the rest of what you're saying in the poem....

you are saying that someone ended their life....in the last line you're saying that person was never 'into to THIS"...i dont see how that connects to someone ending their life...not into what? life? you ?

and there seems to be little or no explanation that if you were so much in love, then why would he end his life?

maybe i just wanna connect the dots...or maybe im just really dense(quite possible) either way, i do like this poem....

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