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No soy Nada
By snakemoney7 on 03/24/2008
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this flowed well... 


Written by rachelle1165  (3/24/2008 8:21:00 PM)

until the last couple of lines...

No soy Nada 


Written by bellaporta  (3/26/2008 7:31:08 PM)

Ok, I am going to give you feedback on this one. You choose one of mine and give me feedback on mine.

I read three, and liked them all. But this one is really special.

Your ability to rhyme is very good. You have a strong voice and a command of language. It's clear that you love to use it. Most of your poems would be great songs.

I like this poem because you actually take a huge risk, break away from a rhyme scheme, and still stay true to your own rhythm.

Poetry is a place to tell the truth. When you get it right, it doesn't need to rhyme, it just needs to say something real. I hear your voice in this one.

Even in two languages, No soy Nada flows.

Anne


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