so very descriptive
Written by rachelle1165 (3/30/2008 8:10:27 AM)
You know what they say
Written by Lone Dreamer (3/30/2008 2:58:37 PM)
Really enjoyed this!
Thanks for sharing it with us.
my favorite of yours so far woman-keep it up!
Written by snakemoney7 (4/2/2008 12:36:19 AM)
||great job- in this passage:
"The power of our passion explodes
into a brillant supernova
that continues burning;
the light of a long-dead star
which can still be seen
after it has ceased to exist."
-maybe the "many years" can be changed to something else--like "eons" or something infinetly greater than many years- (I'm no astronomer) peace-jake
Written by Biggus (4/2/2008 10:57:34 AM)
Written by Unknown Member (4/11/2008 6:17:14 PM)
||i loved this poem.
its such a great great
great great piece of work.
way to go gal.
Written by Sugarmummy (4/22/2008 4:41:29 PM)
||Very descriptive and so well written. Awesome job!