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Collision of Opposites
By ChelleKen on 03/30/2008
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so very descriptive 


Written by rachelle1165  (3/30/2008 8:10:27 AM)

andbeautiful

You know what they say 


Written by Lone Dreamer  (3/30/2008 2:58:37 PM)



Opposites collide.

Really enjoyed this!

Thanks for sharing it with us.

Rich

my favorite of yours so far woman-keep it up! 


Written by snakemoney7  (4/2/2008 12:36:19 AM)

great job- in this passage:

"The power of our passion explodes
into a brillant supernova
that continues burning;
the light of a long-dead star
which can still be seen
many years
after it has ceased to exist."

-maybe the "many years" can be changed to something else--like "eons" or something infinetly greater than many years- (I'm no astronomer) peace-jake

 


Written by Biggus  (4/2/2008 10:57:34 AM)


brilliant 


Written by Unknown Member  (4/11/2008 6:17:14 PM)

i loved this poem.
its such a great great
great great piece of work.
way to go gal.

Awesome! 


Written by Sugarmummy  (4/22/2008 4:41:29 PM)

Very descriptive and so well written. Awesome job!


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