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Left Me Divining
By promiselovechaos on 04/04/2008
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Written by Zyskandar A. Jaimot  (4/5/2008 2:30:46 PM)

to plc - first what is the 'word' in this line please:"look me in the eyes,snd at my arm" ? second if you would have used the word 'FUCK' once it would make this much stronger/more dramatic depending on its placement as is good write thanks for sharing regards zaj


 


Written by JAZZYBARNES29  (4/7/2008 7:35:36 PM)

this is a good poem
im sorry this is happening...
i know this might sound random but what do you mean by your giant?

powerful.... 


Written by devopac  (5/5/2008 1:50:49 AM)

....the message was very strong, however i hope you'll see the pen is more powerful than the blade. Keep writing.


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