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we killed the angels
By chuckykillerdoll on 04/11/2008
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Written by belle65  (4/11/2008 3:09:43 PM)

it is an awesome poem i love the darkness of it

 


Written by snakemoney7  (4/14/2008 1:58:04 PM)


 


Written by rachelle1165  (4/15/2008 4:41:10 PM)


Excellent 


Written by Wind Whisperer  (5/3/2008 6:27:09 PM)

What an excellent piece of work. Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us. *S* Wind Whisperer

 


Written by Llylia  (5/3/2008 7:31:26 PM)

I really like the concept of the poem. It's a great idea and well put together.

I find more than three dots odd though, and I wondered about the last few lines. Did you mean "for it is people" and "for it is nature" or for "its"? It kind of changes the meaning of the last couple depending on whether the apostrophe is meant to be there.

Thank you though.

 

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Written by Unknown Member  (5/4/2008 10:06:24 PM)

So very true. It saddens me the worl my daughter is going to grow up in.

Rayne

 


Written by isisrising  (5/15/2008 8:47:16 AM)



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