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Lust, sometimes overrides trust
By rubberducky0804 on 04/23/2008
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Reviews: 6


Written by Eclipsedshdw  (4/25/2008 3:17:26 PM)

I like this poem its short and bitter sweet :)

like a plane... shot down 

Written by Unknown Member  (4/27/2008 10:10:34 PM)

I think the last three lines shot this poem down. Like it was a quick escape cuz you couldn't find a good ending. Please fix it. Don't let it crumble like that...

But this I like:

"You touched my hand and like a flame,
Something ignited in my vein"


Written by rainy_d  (7/12/2008 10:48:58 PM)

I know.....i know what u mean.


Written by Margie  (7/25/2008 6:23:10 PM)

oh my god, now who as a woman can't relate to that!! well said.


Written by monroxs22  (7/27/2008 10:04:49 PM)


Written by Addiction  (7/28/2008 9:02:46 PM)

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