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Set it Free
By Llylia on 04/30/2008
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Written by Unknown Member  (5/1/2008 1:12:10 AM)

Nice. I agree that it needs a little more, at this point it's still open ended. Something about a phoenix rising might be a possible direction... however that may be too cliche.

In my opinion, I think you should revamp the whole direction in general. The relation of love and lost love to birds and Icarus is one that has been done many times before and in similar fashion...

However, I think you are solid in your writing talents. But I think you need to think more outside the box with this one to give it a unique spin on a timeless tale...

Interesting. 

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Written by Unknown Member  (5/4/2008 1:50:52 PM)

I enjoyed reading this. Parts seem to flow better than others..but over all it was apleasant find. :)

Rayne

 


Written by wildcat_247  (5/7/2008 10:06:29 AM)

It's always fun when that happens and your inner poet takes over for a while. I enjoyed this poem because of the imagery, it's constant climbing, looping, diving and falling only to begin again. Icarus was an inspired choice to represent your heart and emotion.
The only reason I gave it 4 stars instead of five is because I'm mean :P


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