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Your parents will never know
By titita on 05/01/2008
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Written by Unknown Member  (5/1/2008 12:39:14 PM)

I want to like this. However...

There are many spelling errors here, such as curtains, and grammatical errors... and many of the lines lose focus as they run on... and for me, much of it just doesn't make sense...

I can tell you have something to say... maybe it's just a little too abstract for me to grasp...

Overall I think it still needs a lot of work.

i have to agree 

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Written by isisrising  (5/15/2008 8:50:13 AM)



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