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Dance with you
By titita on 05/01/2008
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Written by Unknown Member  (5/1/2008 12:53:09 PM)

Beautifully executed, I must say. Only a few suggestions...

lured is spelled with one l...

maybe change the word crave to craving...

and touched to touching...

always keep an eye on past and present tense transitions...

I dig this a lot...

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