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Flesh & Tears
By TroyArchy on 05/19/2008
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nice idea 

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Written by rachelle1165  (5/19/2008 6:22:47 PM)

but this poem needs some work....first off, its better to use the proper grammar, such as not dropping your g's in "trying" and "going"...

"Dont't depend on anyone"

"Inside there are things"

its always better to use proper grammar and spelling, and try not to fall into using slang unless it really fits the poem itself...

:)

R


I have to agree 


Written by jporter188  (5/19/2008 8:07:42 PM)

Grammer and spelling are important. It really detracts from the writing when you are trying to understand which word is written!

I think you are on the right track--just remember be concrete and real in your writing!


 


Written by TroyArchy  (5/21/2008 2:05:52 PM)



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