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Why Is IT... (Questions, To You)
By TroyArchy on 05/25/2008
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wow 

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Written by rainy_d  (11/2/2008 1:38:23 AM)

Honestly babe....thats a lot of emotion. And trust i feel ur pain...but dont ever think twice on the gift of Life....cause thats the only thing that cant be reversed. U always have a chance to turn things around even if u dont know how right yet.....jus easy.
nuh bodda wit de suicide talk my boi.....the Father will give u everyhting u need in time.

I remember my own 

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Written by rachelle1165  (11/6/2008 9:18:03 PM)

poems that flowed with the same sort of feelings and heartbreak...

Line 6 is missing the word "go" (i think)
line 11 missing the word "if"
line 15, the second "why" should be "that"



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