Written by LeeLee (5/30/2008 6:25:57 PM)
Is William Shakespeare your inspiration? He wrote beautiful poetry... and the potential is there...
Maybe you could write your poetry like poetry and not a text message. i.e. "you" instead of "u" and "true" instead of "tru". The pronoun "I" (as in yourself), requires a capital. Are you not important enough? Keep an eye on your spelling.