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Words From You
By TroyArchy on 05/29/2008
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not bad 

Written by rachelle1165  (5/29/2008 8:24:00 PM)

but a few suggestions...i think in 4th line you could drop "about you", and it will still be effective and flow a little better...
13th line should be "ever", not "never", OR you could just change "won't" to "would"...

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