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Never Lost
By finaaal on 05/29/2008
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Written by LeeLee  (5/30/2008 11:27:47 PM)

Is this just a statement? It is lovely. However, I feel cut off and would have liked to see and feel some type of structured finish.

It starts off beautifully and then becomes rather disjointed, and then...it just comes to an abrupt halt.

The style becomes inconsistent and some of your grammar kills it.

You have used some wonderfully descriptive words, which hold so much power, but you have failed to execute its full potential as a poetic arrangement.

I want to see more...



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