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Be Still My Heart
By nsaynne on 07/02/2008
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agonizingly 


Written by rachelle1165  (7/2/2008 8:51:26 PM)

well done in capturing and projecting the despair ......i felt it pretty viscerally(probably cuz i know how it feels)

nice work

R

spiritualistic 


Written by blogetry  (7/3/2008 3:06:44 PM)

...luv the way you channeled the 'spirit' of love/life lost but restless, not quite ready to R.I.P....ah! but there are limits to your charity... as displayed in the last few lines...only critique is: the last verse didn't flow as well the others...

cheers,
B

 


Written by LamO_osha  (7/3/2008 5:36:40 PM)

wow..... so emotional


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