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By monroxs22 on 07/24/2008
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Written by Leavy  (7/24/2008 8:59:44 PM)

needs spell check and another honest look at punctuation. it is an interesting line of thought at the end "i am now uncomplete get your own layout here, get your own layout here."


Written by monroxs22  (7/25/2008 10:56:39 AM)


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Written by rachelle1165  (7/25/2008 11:36:29 AM)

I just have to say, that while pretty much agreeing with Leavy, it is somewhat lame to rate your own poetry as the whole point of posting here on a poetry WORKSHOP website is to learn to take advice and criticism to help you write better, as well using correct punctuation and grammar....

In my opinion, anyone who thinks their poetry is worth a high rating w/out taking the advice of others probably is either highly talented and arrogant to boot OR not so great and doesnt give a damn what anyone thinks...I dont think this poem indicates the first, and if it is the second, then why bother with a workshop?

If you insist on rating your poetry highly to deflect another review, at least back up and defend your rating.


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