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Vulnerable - I am only this strong
By jtingx on 09/19/2008
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Really beautiful 

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Written by mysticaluna  (9/20/2008 12:57:56 AM)

I'm impressed, and the emotions are very believable.

 

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Written by jtingx  (9/20/2008 6:12:42 AM)

Thank you for your comment^^

Request: More comments & Critics please ^^

 


Written by mysticaluna  (9/20/2008 6:49:23 AM)

I think you mean critiques, not critics and I'm going to rate your poem again because I meant to give you five stars before and it didn't go through.

nicely done 


Written by rachelle1165  (9/22/2008 6:54:50 AM)

good rhyme and flow

Thank you 

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Written by jtingx  (9/22/2008 7:37:17 AM)

Thank you for your comments ^^

Love It! 


Written by June  (9/23/2008 11:14:07 PM)

I really like the way it flows!

It's a pity its too short!

 

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Written by jtingx  (9/23/2008 11:24:46 PM)

Thank you.

I feel it's kind of short too, because it didn't fully portray everything I wanted to..

But I didn't want to make it too long a poem.

But Thank you ^^

Another great one 


Written by paranoidpoet  (9/24/2008 11:58:44 AM)


Thank you. 

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Written by jtingx  (9/24/2008 12:17:43 PM)


 


Written by kingofhearts  (9/24/2008 4:52:44 PM)

you never disapoint anyone do you this is your second poem i read it is the best by far keep it going


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