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Fallen, But I'll Stand Tall Once Again
By jtingx on 09/20/2008
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Written by wickedhart  (9/20/2008 3:07:17 AM)

I really liked reading this...I think it flows very well...:)


Written by mysticaluna  (9/20/2008 3:46:14 AM)


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Written by jtingx  (9/20/2008 4:43:51 AM)

Thank you.

I always believe in room for improvement though, and I would greatly appreciate any critics or comments.

I like it! 

Written by June  (9/23/2008 11:20:02 PM)

It is an encouraging poem, and I like the way you split the poem into half, three stanzas each, for both describing sinking into depression and another 3 to describe getting out of it.

However, I find it a little too dark, because of the word "suicide".

But well, I love it all the same! Keep it up!


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Written by jtingx  (9/23/2008 11:31:09 PM)

Thank you for your comment.

Regarding the word suicide. If you do some research, you will find that due to the rising pressure that many people are facing daily, there has been a rise in suicide cases, or at least a rise in the number of people feeling depressed and THINKING of committing suicide.

Suicide is a highly present factor in today's society, hence I do not really see any point to belittle depression.

I am glad you liked the poem though, thank you ^^


Written by kingofhearts  (9/24/2008 12:17:51 AM)



Written by Biggus  (9/24/2008 6:02:58 AM)

Love it 

Written by paranoidpoet  (9/24/2008 11:57:12 AM)

I can think of so many times I've felt like that (or someone else has). I love your poetry. It's so true to life.

Thank you. 

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Written by jtingx  (9/24/2008 12:15:05 PM)

Thank you for your compliments.

And I believe that experience makes a poem richer and leaves a stronger impact doesn't it?

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