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Just Like You
By kingofhearts on 09/24/2008
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Written by jtingx  (9/24/2008 2:34:47 AM)

It is a nice poem, but what I don't understand is why you have "too" and "if I had that choice" with these -> " "

Is there some sort of deeper meaning which I do not comprehend?

The ending is really sweet though, and it would definately leave a lasting impression for anyone readin it. Great poem ^^

 


Written by Biggus  (9/24/2008 6:02:22 AM)


very sweet 


Written by rachelle1165  (9/27/2008 8:53:19 AM)

some simple but nice rhyme choices

 


Written by kingofhearts  (9/29/2008 11:07:14 AM)


 

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Written by bornwriter  (2/22/2009 11:27:46 AM)

I have a feeling there is more that you would like to say. It's lovely, but I felt a struggle in reading it.


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