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contract's broken
By Kimlouise on 10/01/2008
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Written by jubilee.jrl  (10/1/2008 8:15:00 AM)

Fabolus. i like this one. the only thing i think could be changed is the use of punctuation.

 


Written by Mystic_Beauty  (10/1/2008 11:43:31 PM)

You put in words what hundreds feel, what hundreds experience. You let others know that they are not alone. We can only take steps to put the rights right. Well done & keep writing. Punctuation and correct spelling are vital especially when there is more than one way to spell a word. Ie:Cause your to lazy are we agreed
Cause you're too lazy,are we agreed - in verse 5, last line.
These poems are so important to the women of today. It helps them raise their own voice, which has GOT to be a good thing. Namaste

 


Written by utswoan  (10/2/2008 4:52:13 PM)

This is really an ideal scenario in the world. So I assume he is gone?


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