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Trapped
By TroyArchy on 10/15/2008
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Written by sexykytties  (10/15/2008 3:55:11 PM)

this is my favorite part
"You drove me crazy
There's not a day I can resist
Suicide I constantly
Try to commit"

intense 


Written by rachelle1165  (10/16/2008 8:26:37 PM)

i know how you feel...and it really is up to you when you will be happy again...sometimes it takes a very long time...

found the last stanza to be a little weak as the last couple lines fall out of your rhyming scheme...


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