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By jaimeselizabeth18 on 10/23/2008
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Written by jaimeselizabeth18  (10/24/2008 11:48:06 AM)

that poem made me cry, I loved it!!!


Written by Biggus  (10/27/2008 9:55:05 AM)


Written by jocodi  (10/28/2008 1:01:14 PM)

Well written with good tempo and pace. Good rhyming. The best poems we write are from personal experience (usually emotional)- both good and bad. Best time to write a happy love poem - when you are both in love with each other. Best time to write a sad love poem - when you are not both in love with each other.
Thank you for sharing.

Great Job 

Written by theswimmer90  (10/28/2008 2:54:01 PM)

Very well written, i can tell there was a lot of emotion put into the poem, which is definitely a good thing. The only thing that is holding back that fourth star is the last stanza, it just seems a little off tempo from the rest of them, but that could just be me. Overall very well written. Keep it up.


P.S-Thanks for reviewing my poems, every little thing helps. :)

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