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Three Days Grace
By theswimmer90 on 10/27/2008
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Written by Rainb├│w  (10/28/2008 7:44:40 AM)

the structure of your poem. And it's kind of deep, but still a little near the surface, in my opinion.
The beginning is very good and I'm really fond of the line: "at times where the Universe seems to stand still". That's well done! Try doing that all the way. ;-)
PS: I'd give it a 3.5 if I could...

 


Written by jaimeselizabeth18  (10/28/2008 11:33:31 AM)

Hi, my name is Elizabeth and I thought that that poem was pretty good for an ameuter writer as you and me as well. I think your poem needs a ryhme to make it flow. Read my poem called "Knowing" in this category too.


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