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Walking Along This Path
By jaimeselizabeth18 on 10/28/2008
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Written by jocodi  (10/28/2008 12:54:55 PM)

This is a very interesting poem. It goes along with a steady/regular thought and tempo - and then the last two lines- excellent ending - it brings the poem completely together - here and now. (The last two lines are a story in themselves). Thank you for sharing. This poem even gives me ideas - and that is very good.


Written by theswimmer90  (10/28/2008 2:38:15 PM)

Again, very well done, the tempo and rhyme of this one flows throughout the entire poem, which is awesome. This one seems to contain a bit more of emotion and the words you used to convey that emotion are perfect. I liked how you related love to a path through life, great analogy and something we all can relate to. Great Job.


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