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Angels on the Loose
By AdastrahLeigh on 10/28/2008
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Written by Rainb├│w  (11/24/2008 12:17:47 PM)

I like this, it's pure and heartfelt. But the sudden switch of mood between stanza three and four is unexpected. Is this what sleep does, in your opinion? Maybe you could interject another stanza to make a connection and explain why this happens.
Anyway, I love the title!


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