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Oh, There You Were
By thecrimsonwriter on 11/29/2008
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Written by Unknown Member  (11/29/2008 2:56:09 AM)


awesome 


Written by theswimmer90  (11/30/2008 2:48:42 AM)

awesome poem, i love how you started and ended it the same way, that for me really created a great loop that seemed to connect all the parts of the poem very well. I can feel where your coming from with this too because i feel the same way about this girl i know (one of the many inspirations of my writing). Each stanza is really well written and they all tie in to tell a great story. Good Job.

Would you mind reviewing any of my poems? I would love to get some feedback as an amateur writer and want to know what people think. Thanks so much.

~Z


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