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By Lola29 on 12/27/2008
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Written by blogetry  (12/27/2008 2:55:26 PM)

images magnificently spun here...suggest deleting "like" line 10 - better as a metaphor than simile...don't u think?
1 luv!


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Written by Lola29  (12/27/2008 5:40:32 PM)

Yes, excellent suggestion.
Thank you.

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