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She is with me
By Lola29 on 01/01/2009
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A little rough... 


Written by JAM  (1/1/2009 3:13:40 PM)

But You've Got Potential ;)
Keep It Up!

 

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Written by Lola29  (1/1/2009 3:54:09 PM)

:) potential is good

felt 


Written by blogetry  (1/2/2009 6:11:45 AM)

your sorrow bleeding from the lines of this piece...suggesting adjusting the meter in a few lines to make it less bumpy...good write..
P

Good advice 

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Written by Lola29  (1/2/2009 8:48:52 AM)



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